top 25 Member Playboy Chi Soft drink critique

Hi Playboy Chi,

Thanks for your submission!

Here is your bullet point critique:
*Love the exotic exciting nature of your track!
*Very good use of instrumentation and intensity.
*Great use of vocals in your track.
*We would have you add some 808's underneath your kick for more bottom and maybe even a bassline to double your vocal line.
*Great use of horns as well.
*Be careful of the eighties guitar riffs and drum fills. At times it sounded a bit Magnum PI-ish or Law and Order-ish.
*But we chalked that up to being european exotic.
*Clients may not be as welcoming. Many times they tend to stereotype certain sounds--especially distorted bending guitar as dated.

Nice job.

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