top 25 Member N. Cicero Soft drink critique

Hi N. Cicero!


Thanks for your submission.

Here is your bullet point critique:

*Nice energy and intro off the top.
*We like your drum programming energy as well.
*The groove that follows is a bit too happy for the dark, dangerous, exotic nature of the spot.
*Remember flashing lights in a club with tigers above in cages.
*The melody of your track is very fun and playful. Even the instrumentation used for your melody puts a smile on our face, as opposed to making us feel like we are in a place filled with danger and unpredictability.
*We think your track should be darker, more mysterious, more exotic, and foreign.
*The melody is very kid friendly even though we can hear that you tried to keep it edgy by using edgy fuzzy bassline sounds.
*For this track to work, we would need to strip out the melody and build something that is darker in intensity.

Thanks

The 30 30 Team