Sunday, February 15, 2009

top 25 Member HB Produktionz Soft drink critique

Hello HB Produktionz

Thanks for your submission!

Here is your bullet point critique.

* Nice groove. Very energetic.
*We would have liked to hear more instrumentation especially more exotic instrumentation throughout.
*We like how your track felt like a record for the most part but we felt like it needed more texture and color throughout.
*I think a female or male exotic vocal would have helped immensely with the excitement of the track.
*Check your mix as well. we feel as though your mix could have been brighter so that it would have a stronger impact.
*Remember, tigers in cages are above the dance floor with lots of flashing lights!!!
*Go all out and take more risks. Try arpeggiating your bassline and adding an instrument or two in the higher octave almost like a siren to give the feeling of dangerous intensity.

Thanks

The 30 30 Team

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