Top 25 Member Brian S Tarr Soft drink critique

Hi Brian S.Tarr

Thanks for your submission.

Here is your bullet point critique:

Submission 1

*Great energy in you track and anticipation drums towards the end of your track.
*We thought your track really could have began the way it ended with that drum swell. As soon as that came in, we were looking for the track to really take off but it ended.
*Also, we wanted to hear some exotic sounds as well. You have great textures and visual motion in your music, but we needed to hear some foreign instruments maybe a sitar, some exotic flute, etc... to make us feel like we are in a unique environment.
*Nice mix, we like the fact that your track feels like a party and feels like a record.
*We don't think you should have dropped the drums oput for as long as you did because it slows down the momentum of your track.
*Nicely done!

SUbmission 2

*Nice energy, but this track has much of the same critique as the first submission.
*Needs more exotic instrumentation.
*Tight drum programming.
*We probably need more of a unique identity on this one. It seems like more production on this one would have given it a stronger identity. Maybe a sample foreign female or male vocal would have set it off.


Thanks The 30 30 Team