top 25 Member Delphi Production Soft drink critique

Hi delphi Productions

Thanks for your submission.

Here is your bullet point critique:

*Nice track Delphi. Great sound textures.
*Nice intro.
*The track overall could have been flashier and more exciting. It's a bit subdued once it ignites.
*We feel like it should feel more exotic. Maybe next time use more exotic or foreign instruments. Also the drums could have been more riskier.
*Also, we feel like just when your track starts to kick in, it's over. Sometimes you can avoid this feeling by adding more instruments and starting your main groove earlier. If your track feels bigger and more active, then it won't give off the feeling as if we weren't satisfied fully.
*We think your track should be faster and more reckless and interspersed with danger and unpredictability based on the tiger and flashing lights description.
*Push your track further and really make it edgier and more driving next time.
Nice track.

Thanks
The 30 30 Team