PSYCLONES revise NAvy Bounce 2

*Trumpet synths upfront sound amateurish. Delete all together.
*We are still missing some of that underground in the basement dirtyy vibe in your track
*This is better than the first approach but it needs to get even dirtier and darker.
*Listen more to the scratch track; keep some of the similar bass pulses that are in the scratch track reference.
*Turn your drums up more and fix your bass.
*Where's the voice sample vocal?
*Find a licensable vocal or sound and play it into the track.
*The horn section nis going to be important because it is kind of like a call to arms.
*EQ your piano like the scratch track and add reverb to give it that dark mysterious almost detuned vibe.
The scratch track has a call to arms vibe and that is missing in the emotion in your track.

See what you can do

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