GUSTAVO 102 census urban

Hello Gustavo

Your track needs more shape and a better arrangement
It never builds or inspires us. It is adequate music but not inspirational music
You need to concentrate on making music that is special and not just a groove loop as represented here.
This version is missing personality because it doesn't grow from where it begins.
If we think of the music like a song, it seems as though you have a verse but no chorus.
I don't feel fulfilled after listening to your track. I'm feeling like the track never got to where it was going. It did not tell a story.
No need to include a vocal in this track either unless you do something musically that warrants it.
The reggae style vibe is not a good match for this picture.
Come up with something more motivational and inspirational yet contemporary.

Thanks

The 30 30 Team