BROB OLYMPIC V.2

HELLO BROB

THIS PIECE IS BETTER now that it is based in piano however it still does not feel elegant. It feels dark and mysterious as opposed to elegant and motivational and sentimental.

Also your piece stays the same for too long without developing much.
I like your approach to the idea of being focused on the imagery (I can tell you got into it)
However your track is create din a minor key and to get your track to be sentimental or heartwarmingly elegant, you need it to be in a major key.

Fix your key and try not to be as predictable with where your drums come in.
We are missing the beauty and the x factor that says "I want to see that spot again."
The message of the spot is to support the Special Olympics and it needs to be more inspiring and less mysterious.

Please fix this for tomorrow.

Thanks

The 30 30 Team