"ALEX" CAR SPOT

SNAXBEATS WINS "MALCOLM" CAR SPOT

Congratulations Snaxzbeats on your win. We will be contacting you shortly.

We'd like to give shouts to all the other finalists, especially 30-30 Member Dwight Lin because this was his very first submission and it almost won.

The commercial came down to Snaxbeats and Oshea (Supaproducer1)

In the end, Snaxzbeats won!

Nice job.

Nice submissions overall. Brob had a very nice track. Brian S.Tarr had tight drums on his track.

Plaboy Chi had great submissions throughout this car project.

Nice work.

Congrats again Snaxzbeats.

30-30 CAR SPOT FINALISTS

There are five tracks in contention for latest car commercial spot we had two days ago.

the following 30-30 members tracks are in the finals. One will be the winner.

Dwight Linville
Snaxzbeats
Oshea Supaproducer1
Plaboy Chi (Track was part of his library that we had from a previous submission)
B ROB Productions

R&B HIPHOP SPOT CAR SPOT Music by Wendell Hanes drums by 30-30 member M.Gordon

TITANIC MUSEUM EXHIBIT PROMO

30-30 Member JOE KASTNER WINS TITANIC VOICEOVER SPOT!!

Hello 30-30 members!!

We want to personally congratulate Joe Kastner for winning the voiceover project for the DISCOVERY CHANNELS TITANIC EXHIBIT spot!!!!!

Joe recorded his voiceover i Wisconnsin and took direction from the client by phone.


30-30 member Dre' Dizzle edited and arranged the voiceover takes against the TITANIC picture. The music was composed by Sweden 30-30 member Glen Gabriel and Author/composer Wendell Hanes through what has been coined by Glen as PHONE-POSING. Collaborative composing via telephone and video chat has become an effective way to work!

The project was a success thanks to the talented 30-30 members. This project could not have been accomplished without the use of a team!

The3030career.com is WHERE TEAMS BUILD BRANDS! and we look forward to the launch of the site so we can have even more successes!!

We will be posting a version of the Titanic spot in the coming days on the3030career.com for you all to see!

Great work Joe!!!!!
Thanks

Wendell Hanes and the 30-30 team


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Thanks

The 30 30 Team

TV/RADIO PROMO CRTIQUES

DTARDY

VERSION 1
*Nice ideas.
*This piece is probably too melancholy for the prominence and majestic nature of this spot.
*We want to accentuate the power and prestige and astounding legacy of the Titanic, not so much the tragic loss of life.
*The pan flute really brings us in to the interpersonal sentimental side of the ships history and we want to entice the public with the excitement and awe of the TITANIC spectacle.
*Also, the compression on this spot, really makes this piece thin. We lose the quality of the strings and the impact of the musical ideas.
*Nice piece overall.

VERSION 2 and 3

*The critique is the same as above.

VERSION 4

*Nice musical alignment to picture. Your music accentuates the title card very well. Nice use of choir voices without being melancholy.
*You keep the spot interesting without overdoing it. We like the mystical quality of your piece as it makes us feel like we are uncovering history and learning new facts about the Titanic.
*Be careful of the compression on this version as well. The tendencey for the overall composition to sound thin and less powerful sometimes results.
*Try stacking your horns and more low end strings in your first title card. Your second title card seems thicker than the first and we are sure this is by design, but due to the limited time in this spot, the opening title card could benefit from the fullness.
*You only have two places to hit home the theme. Make sure you grab the audience in both sections with the power and majestic nature of the Titanic.
*Nice use of the harp like sound in the middle.
*Nice job. Unfortunately the track has already been chosen.


PRENQUIST

*Nice structure and score (you da man!)
*We think that the music could take a bit more risks and truly establish a theme for the Title cards at the beginning and the end.
*We would like to hear you experiment more in the middle section with more unique tones so that we really feel like we are uncovering something new.
*We would also like to see bigger hits on the motion graphics to accentuate the information.
*Nice professional job overall.

DRE DIZZLE

*Nice ideas. we would like to have heard a little more bounce and rhythm in your piece, especially for the title cards.
*This piece should promote strength and pride and uplift a legacy of hopes, desires, and intrigue all in one.
*Take a bit more risks and truly establish a theme for the Title cards at the beginning and the end. Don't be afraid to really put your music out in front and make a statement.
*Nice middle section however it feels more heroic and Marvel Comics (Danny Elfman) than intriguing and mystical.
*We enjoyed it nonetheless
*We would also like to see bigger hits on the motion graphics to accentuate the information.
*Nice professional job overall.

INSTANT FEEDBACK ON TITANIC VOICEOVER

Of the 6 submitted so far, Jon Cobert, Mike Leslie, Derrick Davis, and Tracy Skill, so far will be presented to the client.


Chris Viberts

Thanks for your submission!
Here is your 30 Seconds Critique:

- It’s a 30 seconds spot, your pace is too slow, good quality though.

Jon Cobert

Thanks for your submission!
Here is your 30 Seconds Critique:

- Good job, the pace could be a hair faster, great quality.

CF Spicer

Thanks for your submission!
Here is your 30 Seconds Critique:

Your read is distorted with too much bass. We are unable to analyze properly. Please re-record and re-submit.

Derrick Davis

Nice strong commanding voice. we like the confidence and professional quality. We will be submitting your voice.

Mike Leslie

Thanks for your submission!
Here is your 30 Seconds Critique:

- Good job. You could try to sound more “big” and “astounding”

Shedrick

Thanks for your submission!
Here is your 30 Seconds Critique:

- Your pace is too slow but more importantly there is a buzz on your track.


Karen Bernod

Thanks for your submission!
Here is your 30 Seconds Critique:

- Nice voice, but there is a lot of buzz on your track.


Joe Kastner

Thanks for your submission!
Here is your 30 Seconds Critique:

- There is no need for delay, we will deal with that later. Take the delay off your voice and try resending.